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Autumn Leaves

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You touched my heart
but as time goes on
you've forgotten
haven't you?
that you and I
had warm memories
like the autumn leaves
that were once
outside my window.


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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Well I'm pretty impressed by the amount of detail and vibrant colors in this... Well judging by your gallery which has amazing work this is a little different from what you drew in your gallery...

Overall I like the coloring, like the shine in the eyes, and the faint pink lips. I also love the clothing wrinkles. And the array of colors in the hair.

Though I think that the end of the sweater that the character is wearing is a little bit unrealistic, and some of the color of the hair spread on a little bit to the neck.

Still it's a very good piece!

This is really good, keep up the good work Sabitan~!